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Take everything you love,
aesthetic love, platonic love, romantic love.
OMG I LUV UR SHOES.

And take it to the edge of some thing rather high.
Rather tall in stature.
One by one, dropping them.

How did we, humans.
Develop the need to...
Love?

And why have we bastardized,
and bastardized
and bastardized
our language.

Love is a hyperbole,
that has lost

all

meaning.

Now could you drop your family,
one by one,
Your record collection,
one by one,
Your best friend,
one by one,
Your current love interest that you claim will be forever,
one by one?

A four letter word,
lie,
invitation to creation,
excuse for erratic behaviour
and most importantly,
emotion that so many of us lost.
©2008-2009 ~abacusfinch
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*Grifmore:iconGrifmore: Nov 16, 2008, 11:39:22 AM
Okay. Fuck me, this is good. Brilliant wordplay, maybe even some of the best I've ever seen O__o

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I used to dream of mushroom clouds.
Smoke that could block out the light.
Black flames that could eat the sun.
Replace day by permanent night.

- End Scene, Troels Abrahamsen, WHT
~abacusfinch:iconabacusfinch: Nov 16, 2008, 1:28:17 PM
Thank you, thank you so much.

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Do the world a favor, shut up.
=GodspeedYouBlackEmpe:iconGodspeedYouBlackEmpe: Nov 16, 2008, 6:26:52 PM
It's absolutely true. Every word of it.

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be active with the activists, sleep with the sleepers while you're waiting for the great leap forward.
~abacusfinch:iconabacusfinch: Nov 16, 2008, 6:51:13 PM
Thank you.

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Do the world a favor, shut up.
~onlyyouneedtoknow:icononlyyouneedtoknow: Nov 16, 2008, 9:02:20 PM
its so true

but cant we find a way to fix it.

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nomnomnomnomnomnomnomnomnomnom etc.
~abacusfinch:iconabacusfinch: Nov 16, 2008, 9:34:21 PM
Or just not care.

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Do the world a favor, shut up.
~onlyyouneedtoknow:icononlyyouneedtoknow: Nov 18, 2008, 8:52:53 PM
thats why it is this way in the first place then :/

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nomnomnomnomnomnomnomnomnomnom etc.
~abacusfinch:iconabacusfinch: Nov 18, 2008, 8:58:17 PM
Psht, I disagree.

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Do the world a favor, shut up.
~dimerization:icondimerization: Nov 20, 2008, 5:48:13 PM
Factual. How depressing.

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:typerhappy:
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