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What Will Never Be Again by ~abacusfinch:iconabacusfinch:



We still hold onto this room.
not letting go, never.
Complete recollection of past dreams.
Past hopes, and the idea of a future.
A now we hoped to actually live.

Old wall paper and cracked hardwood floors,
This is where hope is slaughtered.
This is where I died.
The bed rots into the floor below me.
The windows smashed,
a leak to the world outside.

The world we lived once,
and not again.
This mirror is cracked, and rusted.
But I still see myself in it.
Perfect reflection of what was.
And what will never be again.
©2008-2009 ~abacusfinch
:iconabacusfinch:

Author's Comments

Talk about a shitty fucking idea for a poem. I got inspired by Coalesce, and I ended up writing shit. Meh

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:iconjaspgrr:
That is not shit, shit head.
This masterpiece, in which you call shit truly awesome.
:iconabacusfinch:
baaaaaw. Is shit to me.

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Do the world a favor, shut up.
:iconflobblem:
I like the second stanze

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A 'bore' is someone who deprives you solitude without providing you with company - Gian Vincenzo Gravina
:iconabacusfinch:
I think the second stanza is the lacking one, in my opinion.

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Do the world a favor, shut up.
:iconflobblem:
I like the idea of the room being a separate place to the world, dingy and dirty, with the window being the leak into the outside world.

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A 'bore' is someone who deprives you solitude without providing you with company - Gian Vincenzo Gravina

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